Friday, December 11, 2009

TO THE U.S JESUS RAMIREZ

During the year 2004 my family and i decided that we were going to the U.S. I imagened that this would be a great journey. We had decided on a date to leave. The day before leaving we had to say good buy to all of our relatives. Saying good buy was realy hard because family is a big thing for us.

The first day I got here I tough I was in a different world. Every thing was so different and more beautiful. I saw Lott's and Lott's of more people, big buildings and allot of light's that made the city looked more beautiful. Being here at the beginning was a really big struggle for me. I didn't know Any English so talking to other people was a struggle. After 2 years of hard work I started to communicate with other people batter. I started to understand more of what was going around me.

After being here for 5 years i have gotten used to to it and have a batter life. I some times wonder how my return wheel be. I always think of it as me being a more progressive person for my community. I would be able to help other people now that I know two languages. I hope that when I return I will make a difference in the people that know me.

4 comments:

  1. Very nice idea for your journey story, just work on your grammar a bit more. But very good!

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  2. i like how u guys have better grammar and word choice than us seniors. lol i think we kinda lagged it with our writing skills. leticia a.

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  3. i liked ur story good job!!!!-celina

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